Winter Splendor Comes Too Soon: Poems and Images

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By RedElf

Winter has come "with a vengeance," as we say up here when the season changes this quickly. We were happily enjoying our usual November weather. We dutifully booked appointments to change to winter snow tires, and carefully brushed the light skiff, the barest frosting of powdery fluff from deck and sidewalks, digging out the snow shovels for when the real snowfall would come.

Remembrance Day was crisp but manageable -3 Celsius, give or take a degree - certainly not chilly enough to drive the cenotaph ceremonies indoors. Saturday was a positively balmy -1, and a light skiff of snow fell that night. Then, on Sunday night, Mother Nature dropped a foot and a half of snow on us - in three hours. Along with that, she pulled the plug on the balmy temperatures for the thermometer dropped to -20 Celsius that night and has hovered just below that ever since.

Winter came far too quickly this year...

The dogs and I must now enjoy our morning and afternoon walks very quickly, for though there are many lovely winter vistas to admire, we are too chilly to linger. Where once we marveled over the play of light among the branches, now we frame the picture, click the shutter, and move smartly down the lane towards home and warmth.


Nut Hatches gather the last of the frost-nipped Mountain Ash berries and Birch seeds.
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Nut Hatches gather the last of the frost-nipped Mountain Ash berries and Birch seeds.

Winter Splendor Comes Too Soon


Soft grey on softer sky, the trees, alive with crested friends,

Yield frosted feast of fruit and seed, one festive last goodbye

To autumn's riches...

Winter splendors tend to be the chilly sort.

Crystalline, diamante, sparkling with too-icy fire

That breathes on toes and fingers,

Sending hands and feet for warmer pockets, fleece-lined boot.

Winter splendors come too soon.

Each year unwary and unwilling souls wish warmth would linger,

Spinning tire on road, in ditch;

Too soon off-road, they end in snowy-banked remorse -

"Next year! Next year, I'll note the signs and better trim my sails

For wintery blasts..."

Yet next year comes as years will do,

And finds souls set with backward glance, unready yet again...

Warmth and harvest richness seem but a blink away,

Perhaps they were a dream...

So now we dream of warmer times, and climes where sun beats, brazen, down;

Where white sand beaches beckon winter refugees,

And promise bootless freedom for all sand-warmed toes;

Yet bootless long for warmth at home,

For winter splendor's come - too soon.


Frost-touched Bull Rushes
Frost-touched Bull Rushes

Ode to a Bull Rush


Frozen feet in icy ditches, red-winged choristers' former home,

Golden gleam in morning sunlight, ragged tops now winter-blown;

Green you were, and heavy headed, brown and full your lofty crown

Nodding gently to the waters; frond and tip, your verdant gown...


Woven, leaf and frond, in basket, boat of reeds in ancient song,

Once to Pharaoh's daughter bore you, proud and safe, an infant son;


Now you stand in frozen roadside, far from sun, from Egypt gone;

Proud and thick, your rustling voices, thronging dugout, slough, and pond,

Whisper to the winds you story

Of a boy you saved for glory;


Every seed that flies before me

Bears the rush's summer-longing

For release from winter's binding;

Wait in ice-bound rags 'til springtime

Once more greens the ground;

Then, once more your murmuring music

Weaves with wheat a summer song...


'Til then, O sentinel of former grace and graceful, bending form,

By drifted field and rutted lane you rustle faintly,

Keening on the winter gale your tale of foreign lands and princes,

Sultry breezes, sand-etched temple, ankh, and flail, and winding river;

Dream of a far-off summer from your frozen, trenchèd, ice-locked stand...


Roadside Reeds
Roadside Reeds

© 2011 Text and photos by Elle Fredine, All rights reserved. Photos may be used only with express written permission from the author.

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FloraBreenRobison 6 months ago

We got some half-rain half snow today-the first of the season. We usually don't get any in November. Last November we had a wicked wind storm that made it feel 20 below (that is celcius for those of you who don't live in Canada) even though it was dry. Our summer in B.C. was late in arriving too.

Beautiful poem and pictures.

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drbj Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Love your Winter Splendor poem although it made me feel cold, Elle.

For me, wintry blasts are pretty much a thing of the past. I moved from the Midwest to Florida and never regretted it. So when you start to freezin' and can't stop sneezin', come on down.

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healingsword Level 3 Commenter 6 months ago

Hi RedElf,

Lovely poetry and photos! Your images and word choices are rich and beautiful, and your poems here flow very naturally within a bit of form. Best of all, these poems have many levels of reference, offering more than description. Great job!

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WD Curry 111 Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Those birds are on their way down here. The native Americans tell me they used to dim the sun. Don't tell me there are no seasons in Florida.

I am no poet, but I studied poetry intensely in college. Is that weird for one who has no intention of being a poet? I recognize good stuff. This is good stuff,

"Green you were, and heavy headed, brown and full your lofty crown

Nodding gently to the waters; frond and tip, your verdant gown..."

Nice.

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Candie V Level 4 Commenter 6 months ago

Brrrrrr!! I'll make a fresh pot of coffee and we'll enjoy this change of seasons together! Thanks redelf!!!

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alekhouse Level 4 Commenter 6 months ago

Love your poetry. Thanks.

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Patty Inglish, MS Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

I like both these poems very much and enjoy the photography. Rated Up and many more; shared with followers.

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snakeslane Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

Oh these poems are winter fresh, lovely rhyme. The photos too, gorgeous. Good job RedElf! I woke up to a skiff of snow here too this morning, so pretty on the tree branches and covering the messy leave fallen yard with a forgiving blanket of white Regards, snakeslane

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adrienne2 Level 5 Commenter 6 months ago

HP really have some fantastic poets. RedElf this was lovely, enjoyed your pics to. Reminds me that I have to go out in the cold today. *shiver,shiver* Thanks for sharing!

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Seeker7 Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Very beautiful poems that express winter so well. It is a beautiful season, no doubt about it, but it can wear you down quite quickly. You are also correct - no one is ever prepared despite the previous years promise.

Beautiful hub + voted up!

sestasik 6 months ago

Lovely.

We had our first ice storm in October this year - very early for us!

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RedElf Hub Author 6 months ago

Thanks so much for stopping by, Flora. Glad you enjoyed the poems.

drbj, I wish I could say the same about escaping winter. Glad you enjoyed the poem.

healingsword, thanks so much for your kind words. To me, writing poetry is a weaving together layers of words, images, and feelings. It's always interesting to hear what people take away from the finished piece.

WD Curry, thanks so much! I am so pleased you liked my weavings.

Candie V, so pleased you stopped by and commented. I will def have the coffee on!

Thanks so much, alekhouse! Always lovely when you stop by.

Patty, thanks so much for the rate up and share. So glad you liked the photos.

snakelane, thanks so much. I wouldn't have gotten the photos had it been warmer, but I would forego them for a bit longer fall this year :D

adrienne2, thanks so very much - there are a lot of great poets here.

Seeker7, it seems to come so fast, some years! Glad you enjoyed the photos.

sestasik, that's far too early for snow and ice. Here's hoping your winter eases up a bit. Glad you liked the poems.

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anglnwu Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

Agreed, winter comes too soon. Love the imagery contained in your picturesque poems. The photos are lovely too. Rated up.

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Enelle Lamb Level 4 Commenter 6 months ago

Voted up, shared with followers and rated :D Excellent poetry and images! Makes me glad I'm indoors...gotta gear up to shovel the driveway lol...

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RedElf Hub Author 6 months ago

anglnwu, thanks so much - I'm so pleased you enjoyed the poems and the pictures.

Thanks so much for the share and rate, Enelle. Our poor doggies are getting pretty short shrift in the walks department because of the bitter cold.

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mary615 Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Lovely poem; made me shiver though to read it. Your photos were excellent, too.

We had a cold front here in S. Fl. last week....got down to 55 degrees! I don't know how people live in a cold climate.

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RedElf Hub Author 6 months ago

Thanks so much, mary! Glad you enjoyed the chilliness :D We "layer" and I believe our blood gets a bit thicker.

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renoelle 5 months ago

Looks too chilly for me - :D

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RedElf Hub Author 5 months ago

Thanks for stopping by to comment, renoelle.

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Hello, hello, 5 months ago

These were exeptional beautiful. so expliit. Thank you for the joy of reading them.

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RedElf Hub Author 5 months ago

Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving a wonderful comment, friend Hh!

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